tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8057679725514519297.post4383628007475747449..comments2010-01-03T00:52:18.507-06:00Comments on Throw The Mattress On The Bathtub: ConvulsionLealouhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07160241587113766411noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8057679725514519297.post-15769736530472674562010-01-03T00:52:18.507-06:002010-01-03T00:52:18.507-06:00They do coincide. Great idea, I will try to compil...They do coincide. Great idea, I will try to compile the three together. Same thought process, so it could work.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8057679725514519297.post-31568006684227832252010-01-02T22:26:28.500-06:002010-01-02T22:26:28.500-06:00I really like this poem. I like the repetition of...I really like this poem. I like the repetition of the "tongue" lines and I like the final line. I think this could make a good start to a longer poem, and then maybe put "Ash" and "Void" underneath? I don't know . . . they all seem related, which is why I would consider organizing them together. I want to hear more about who this "you" is and who this "me" is and why they were together and what happened and and and! More, please!Courtneyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15454611865480258715noreply@blogger.com