I think I'm in school-mode because I am EATING UP your sea, moon, female, mother imagery in this and in "Open sea of my soul." I could write a paper on these things! So I'm in an analytical mode and my comments seem to be more along the lines of what you could do with them; today I'm having a hard time seeing what's actually here. I just want you to keep writing (for my own selfish interests; I love your poems!)!
Thoughts and musings from a thirty-something woman.